Improve my cover letter
Paste a cover letter you have already written and get a rewritten version with a clearer opening, stronger connections between your experience and the role, and tighter language throughout.
What typically gets improved
The most common issues in a first-draft cover letter are a weak opening line, achievements described vaguely rather than specifically, sentences that are longer than they need to be, and a closing paragraph that fades out instead of confidently asking for next steps. The rewrite tool targets exactly these areas.
Before and after: opening lines
| Original opening | Improved opening |
|---|---|
| I am writing to apply for the position of Marketing Assistant that I saw advertised. | As a marketing graduate who grew a student society's social following from 200 to 3,000 followers in one semester, I was excited to see your Marketing Assistant opening. |
| I would like to be considered for this role because I think I am a good fit. | Your posting for a Warehouse Supervisor immediately caught my attention, since coordinating shift schedules and reducing pick errors has been the focus of my last three years in logistics. |
Strengthening the middle paragraphs
The improved version will typically tighten vague claims into specific ones. 'I have strong communication skills' becomes something closer to 'I trained four new starters on our customer service scripts, all of whom passed their probation reviews on the first attempt', assuming that detail is present or can reasonably be inferred from what you provided.
Fixing a weak closing paragraph
Many letters end passively, for example 'I hope to hear from you soon.' A stronger closing restates specific interest and invites action directly: 'I would welcome the opportunity to discuss how my experience with supplier negotiations could support your procurement team, and I am available for a call at your convenience.'
Keeping the letter in your own voice
The rewrite aims to sharpen structure and clarity, not replace your personality. After receiving the improved version, read it aloud. If a sentence does not sound like something you would actually say, adjust it, since authenticity matters as much as polish in an interview follow-up.
What to do next
Once your letter reads well, run it through the Score tool for a final objective check, particularly on length and structure, before sending it alongside your CV.
Frequently asked questions
Will the rewrite change the facts in my letter?
No, it works with the facts and achievements you have written and focuses on clarity, structure and impact, not on adding new claims.
Can I choose a different tone for the rewrite?
Yes, you can select a tone such as professional, direct, enthusiastic or formal and the rewrite will adjust accordingly.
How much shorter or longer will the rewrite be?
The tool generally aims for a similar or slightly tighter length, keeping the letter within the recommended 250 to 350 word range.
Should I use this before or after tailoring my letter to a specific job?
Either order works, but improving structure and clarity first, then tailoring the details to the specific advert, tends to save you time.
Can I improve a letter that was originally written in a very different style?
Yes, paste it as it is and select the tone you want for the improved version; the tool will restructure it accordingly.